For this essay I think that there are a lot of minor tweaks
that I could make to perfect my essay. I put a lot into this essay because I
really enjoyed the prompt. Analyzing is my favorite, but I think that because I
was too into writing it that it resulted in little minor things such as grammar
and punctuation. Spelling was not an issue for me but my diction could be a lot
better. I could have used words that were of a higher caliber. Also simple
punctuation issues- I’m either comma happy or I just simply do not use enough
commas. To address the problem I will most likely look over things myself and
go over things in our handbook. After I feel like I have done everything I
could do, I will take it to the writing lab. I also probably rambled off a
little too much in my paper so I will try to cut some things out. Overall I
just have to proof read. Like print out my paper and make little tweaks by hand
because I think that is how you really see and point out your mistakes.
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