Revised: In order to be successful, a politician must win over the hearts and minds of their voters. The appeal to pathos convinces voters that he/she cares about the community in which they live. The appeal to logos helps the audience understand logically that one person will do a better job than another. Kerry Healey uses pathos and logos in her speech to the Republican National Convention on August 30, 2012. Appeals to pathos and logos are applied by Healey in order to convince the audience that Mitt Romney is the best candidate for President of the United Sates of America because he cares about the American people and can run the country effectively while boosting the economy.
The only thing that was missing from this paragraph was the date Healey spoke to the RNC. Everything else was included.
I think you did a very good job realizing your mistake and being able to improve it on your own. The appeals to pathos and logos are very evident. You make them very clear and let the reader immediately know how they use it and why it is the best way to appeal to the audience.
ReplyDeleteHi Shelby ! I think you did a great job revising your paragrqaph. You realized the mistake you made and corrected it . Your paragraph flows very well and you described the appeals used very well. You made it very evident why the speaker used the appeal and why they used it.
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