"McCain
appeals to ethos, pathos and logos in his speech to convince the viewers that
the republican party needs to be placed back in power to help America get back
on track."
I do not think i will revise my thesis. But I decided to post it and see if anyone had any opinions to how i should revise it. I think i have a very strong thesis and is straight and to the point of what McCain does in his speech using his appeals. I think it is very general to let me use my paragraphs to get more in depth into how he uses each appeal in his speech. I hope to go to the writing lab to see if they think otherwise. I used help already from Mrs. Darlington to help revise my thesis before so i had already used another set of eyes prior to the revisions. If anyone has any other opinions as to what i should do to make this thesis any better i would love to hear them and would be very open to anyones revisions.
So you wrote three paragraphs for each of pathos, ethos and logic for your essay?wow! I bet it was long essay! Did you have enough room to make each paragraph deep and strong? It is hard to cover all of them in only one essay.However, I like your thesis statement. It is straight to the point and complete. First, when I started to write this essay I tried to cover rhetorical analysis as much as I could, but I ended up with overwhelmed essay, so I got help from Mrs. Darlington and the writing lab and to start over my essay again. The important thing that everybody pointed out for me was the depth of essay is more important than the number of covered rhetorical analysis. As a result, I eliminate them to two so I could write strong arguments about each of them.
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