Friday, November 30, 2012

Structuring a proposal Argument


            Being one of the top ten college in the country and also opening the way for getting into University of Florida attract lots of students across the states of Florida to the Santa Fe College every year. However, there is one problem that always irritates the students of this college. Parking spot! There is no enough parking spots for students car all the time, so students either going to be late for their classes because they have to go around and around of the campus to find a parking spot, or they have to come at least 30 minutes early to find somewhere suitable and close to their classrooms. Expanding the bus system from Santa Fe College to different location of city of Gainesville would help this problem to go away, and has lots of benefits for students. So far making the bus free for students helps a lot. Lot of students who have been driving their cars to college now are able to ride for free and do not be worried for finding a parking spot before their classes. By riding the buses, students who have late classes do not need to be worried about walking to their far parked car alone. Finally, Students can save money on their gas by riding buses for going to school. Some students complain about waiting for bus for a long time, however, this problem would be solved by expanding the number of buses and bus lines. For the conclusion, riding buses help students to save money, be on time for their classes and not being worried about finding a parking spot, and being safe and secure by riding public transportation.

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