Friday, September 14, 2012

essay outline


Outline
Intro:
  • ·         2011 Ford Mustang
  • ·         Posted in between 2010 and 2011
  • ·         In and automotive magazine   
  • ·         Thesis: The 2011 Ford Mustang is one of the fastest mustangs out there that it should make the person driving it scared.

Paragraph 1:
  • ·         Wording
  • ·         The effect of the picture.
  • ·         No other car in the picture.

Paragraph 2:
  • ·         The effects make it look like the car is going fast
  • ·         The words suggest that the person that is driving should be scared of the speed.

2 comments:

  1. well i think more that the image is not about being scared. its more about "can you handle it". it pushes people to do the challenge. telling someone that he is scared of something always pushes them to do it to prove a point. the message in this picture is not about telling them that they should be scared of the speed, its more about can they handle it, can they buy the car to prove that this speed has nothing on them. this picture is more provocative, that a warning.

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  2. I like how you chose a car, it refreshing from all of the other ads. However, I think you should not talk about the fear of the car's speed so much.

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