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Friday, September 21, 2012
Week 5: "Why Bambi Must Go" Rhetorical Analysis
Daniel Cristol begins his article by heavily relying on imagery to paint a picture of Central Park in New York City. The problem that he identifies is that of the high deer population is taking a toll on the lives of people, forests of the area, and its wildlife inhabitants, and there is not much that could be done about this population issue. He assumes his readers are not to well informed about the subject at hand, thus providing many details about deer population, its history, and other animals of the Central Park area. His purpose is to provide a solution for the problem. In order to accomplish this purpose, he appeals mainly to wildlife managers. In this essay, Cristol addresses the main argument against his thesis, the idea that the conservation methods of the early 20th century were extremely successful and managed to keep the deer population at a desirable number. He refutes his argument by saying that perhaps the efforts to manage the deer reflects negatively upon the rest of the ecosystem. Finally, he concludes by making the point that a healthy balance between management and the course of nature is much needed. He acknowledges the need for better methods of management while simultaneously pointed out that too much management may not always be a good thing. Overall, the argument Cristol makes is ineffective because he emphasizes greatly upon the problems, not not necessarily enough on the solution. If there were more support, more elaboration , and more focus on the solution, his argument would prove to be very effective.
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I agree, the essay need to focus a bit more on the possible solutions present. I believe the article was well written except for showing considerable knowledge of what he was talking about.
ReplyDeleteYes! This is the same conclusion that I had when I got to the end of this paper. I felt like it was really top-heavy. He spent so much time explaining the problem and elaborating on those details that the final conclusion and solution felt lackluster. I felt like with maybe an extra paragraph or so dedicated to the solution he could've made this argument a lot stronger.
ReplyDeleteTO me, I think that the problem would be the deers eating all the leaves and leaving no food for the warblers that migrate to New York during the spring. The solution would be to set up fences so that the deers can't eat all of the food. Then during the spring you would start seeing more warblers. I felt that the solution was effective.
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