Friday, September 14, 2012

Goin Green Please


Week 3 DP Going Green

Review the checklist "Questions about Your Essay's Structure and Style" on PA 209 and apply it to "Going Green" (PA 212-16).  Post your answers here.

·      Yes the Going green movement has a good thesis. It addresses the subject of colleges making changes.
·      Yes the topic sentences are clear in which the tell you the specific details
·      Yes they used research to support their movements
·      Yes they explain hwy everyone should “go green” and how there really isn’t an excuse not too
·      Yes I was comfortable reading the essay and how much information I received was great
·      Other than “going green” I don’t really see what else is wrong with it. But even that is the name of what it actually is called
·      It was concise in which how it states that change will be difficult but can be done.

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