Outline
Form for Essay 2
Thesis: Obama’s Idea for America is to strengthen the
country not only through its Government but also its people ethic._________________________________________________________________________
I. Topic 1:
Obama is eager to be re-elected.__________________________________________
A.
Example: He has faith in his
policies._______________________________________
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1. Explain:
Even though he states it will take time he believes his policies will
fix America.
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B.
Example: Obama is faithful in the
American people.___________________________
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1. Explain:
He states a community effort that must be done._________________
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C.
Example: Obama does not seem
worried.___________________________________
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1. Explain:
Obama never state his flaws nor anyone else’s or from any party.____
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II. Topic 2:
Obama has faith that the American people can pull through along with
himfelf.___
A.
Example: Obama states his
targets.________________________________________
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1.
Explain: goals in manufacturing, energy,
education, national security, and the deficit; a real, achievable plan that
will lead to new jobs.
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B.
Example: Obama want to run for
the people._________________________________
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1. Explain:
He wants his America to be united and does not state problems with any
other party.__________________________________________________________________
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C.
Example: Obama states that big decision
are to be made in the next few years.______
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1.
Explain: taxes and deficits; energy and
education; war and peace are a few of the topics.
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III. Topic 3:
Obama is blunt in his conversation.______________________________________
A.
Example: Obama states a challenge
to come._________________________________
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1. Explain:
He says that it will not be an easy task to fix America.____________
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B.
Example: He shows that Government
doesn’t control all in politics and economy.___
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1. Explain:
He states that the effort to fix America cannot be rested on just the
government but the people must also give an effort_________________________________________
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C.
Example: He is experimental and
open._____________________________________
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1. Explain:
He uses Franklin D. Roosevelt as a idol for that way he wishes to run
his campaign with experimental policies.________________________________________________
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That's interesting that we have the same video but completely different thesis and outline.In your first topic when u said Obama has faith in himself or he does not look worried,all of these show he is making credibility for himself.This is a good way to catch audience attention and make them believe in speecher's word.Also, He does that for his audience too.He gave them credibility and the feeling of being important so this would encourage them to vote for him.For example when he stated "he effort to fix America cannot be rested on just the government but the people must also give an effort",he makes his audience sure that their vote would not be waited if they vote for him.
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