http://www.politico.com/news/stories/0912/80890.html
President Obama, who is hoping to
be reelected for the second time, gave his speech at Democratic National
Convention on September 6th, 2012 in Charlotte, North Carolina. He
started his speech with sense of appreciation toward his family which shows he
values his family and in general the family organ and sense of loving more than
anything in his life. Then he thanked his chairwoman which shows he is thankful
forever thong that other have done for him. The purpose of this speech is a
mixture of persuasion and informing. An example of persuasion in the speech is
when he said “when you
pick up that ballot to vote – you will face the clearest choice of any time in
a generation.”, and an example of informing in his speech was when he described
his main goals for the next four years will be focused on jobs and the economy;
taxes and deficits; energy and education; war and peace. In the last part of
his introduction president Obama talked about how important is to choose the
right path for the future by considering this preparation he came to his main
thesis for his speech. His thesis is his path of fighting to restore the values
that built the largest middle class and the strongest economy the world has
ever known. The rest of his speech is a well organized argument with the different
topics that all of them peruse his thesis.
I think you are completely right in thinking that persuasion is a tool used by Obama within his speech. Most political speeches are mainly considered persuasive speeches. I think that this is a very strong supportive paragraph. Though I think that your opening sentence is something that could be used in your introduction paragraph rather than in a body paragraph because it is introducing the topic in which you are going to be writing about and that is usually stated at the beginning of an essay. Over all though I believe this is an awesome body paragraph with really good examples.
ReplyDeletethanks for helping me out.Which sentence do you think is the opinion?about the purpose of the speech? you mean? Well,all the essay will be my opinion because I am the one analyzing the speech,and purpose is one of the rhetorical analysis that we can include in this essay.I was thinking that talk about the importance of participating in election in my introduction.It is broad enough,and does not mention anything of my thesis in it.
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