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I believe the writer,Shawn
Holton, has enough examples and statistic to support his thesis in “Going Green”
essay. For examples, in paragraph the writer brings examples to support how
going green can save money in colleges and universities. In addition, in the
same paragraph he uses statistics of reducing electricity’s bill by using solar
panels in University of South Carolina. For his second sup pointing paragraph
he mentions example of Carnegie Mellon University and University of California.
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Yes, the writer brings at
least one example or statistic either for his support paragraphs or for his
refutation. For examples, he uses the University of Colorado for his first
refutation with accurate citation which he mentions in the last of the essay.
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Yes, the sources are update mostly from 2007,
2008years ,and they are from reliable recourses like New York Times and
from American College and University President of Climate Commitment.
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The recourses are completely
relevant ,from articles like “Keep the Green Agenda off Campus”, “A Call for
Climate Commitment” , “The Greening of America’s Campuses”, and “A Green
Curriculum Involves Everyone on Campus “by Peterson,john. However, for giving
even more credibility to his argument, the writer should mention the specialty’s
of articles’ writers.
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No, there is no source
oppose of the author’s thesis in this article so writer could consider as being
bias here.
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